Year 6M

The forest Part 1

Late one night, a large thunder storm hit Manchester, it’s powerful lightning struck trees and cars, it made buildings shake.”Ahh what was that!” thought Jack clutching the covers . He climbed out of bed and carefully tip-toed down the stairs and into the living room. He gazed at the picture of his dad,” I wish you were here, I miss you,” he sobbed quietly.

It was morning and Jacks mother told him to go deliver some sweet treats he had made.” Go on, it will give you some exercise and you’ll get to spend some quality time with granny, it will be fun.”she insisted.

“Fine, only for you mum,” Jack replied as he started to walk through the frozen, damp forest. It was getting colder and colder and Jack was getting more miserable.” Why couldn’t mum just go on her own, and why didn’t I bring a coat, ugh I am so silly…”just at that moment something was glowing, he didn’t know what it was but he did want to find out…

What was it? Why was it there? Should Jack take it?

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Into the forest

It was a stormy night in Manchester as a terrible,atrocious lightening flash hit a old cottage.When the lightening struck Brian was awake strait away and he thought to himself”What is going to happen to me and my family”As he racked on his bed.

When the storm stopped he went back to sleep and the next morning his mother asked him to go to his grandma’s house to give Somme goodies,but instead of going the safe way he went into the FOREST…..

When he got in the forest a figure flashed by  he didn’t know what it was so he ran he didn’t look back he just ran and on his way he found a silky cloak he wanted to put it on but the figure went past again so he ran again and by the he knew it he was in granma’s house.

but in the house wasn’t his granma it was the figure ……


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Into the forest

It was a stormy night when all the bolts jumped of the dreaded clouds and hit the rocky ground with a loud thud.”I want my mum…”whispered Jack,as he shivered in fear wetting the entire bed.BANG!

The very next morning,Jack woke up still shivering.Gingerly,he ate his dinner,with all the stormy thoughts swimming rapidly trough his mind.

“Jack, will you please go deliver some lovely,yummy treats you have made to grandma?”questioned Jack’s mum,as she gave him the basket.Jack started his journey through the creepy forest,he started to get really tired.He met a seething child sitting aside of the oak-brown tree.Jack wanted to say hello,however he was too tired to open his lazy mouth.

Deeper into the forest,he recognised a fully red,fuzzy coat,suddenly it starts snowing heavily.Straight away he decided to place the warm coat on,however he didn’t know what sort of coat it was.It was cursed…

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In to the forest

“Mmmmm mum this food is so delicious,” Jack said, talking with his mouthful. Rosa, his sister, agreed happily.

When they all had finished their breakfast, Jack’s mum asked him if she would give his grandama some soup. “She’s ill today, you better run over and give her my special homemade soup also she will be happy to see you,”

“Well if you say so mum,” replied Jack grabbing the soup of her and running out of the door.

Jack walked and walked until he saw two signs. One said safe and one said unsafe. ” I’ll go the unsafe way it can’t be that bad, but as he entered that way, he found himself inside a dark forest. This forest was very unusual it had no leaves on the trees and birds weren’t singing sweetly, they were croaking something out of tune.

After walking at least 10 minutes he stopped. He saw a man with a cow just randomly chilling there in the middle of the forest. “Who are you?” Jack questioned, looking confused.

“Well my name is jack and I smell something lovely in that basket of yours,” he declared.

“My name is jack and you can’t have this soup it’s for my grandma,” Jack snapped.

“If you give me the soup I’ll give you my cow,” he responded, but as he carried ontalking Jack ran and ran and ran, until he could see no sign of the man.When he was running Jack bumped into something. It was a cloak. It was getting a bit chilly so he put it on.

Jack trudged on and on until he saw his grandma’s house from the distance.

When he finally arrived at his grandma’s house he gave her the soup and hugged her.

The end

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One stormy night Roco was lieying down in bed. Boom! Bang! Something was on the roof! It woke him up suddenly! He couldn’t get to sleep he had to stay awake all night.

The next day outside when the sun was shining bright, Roco was told by his dad “Please give these cakes and medicine to your ill grandmother.”

Roco then seted off, during this journey Roco met an unusual girl. He asked her “Who are you?”

She replied back “I am here to help.”

Roco then Annouced ” Can you tell me where my grandmas house is?”

“It’s straight ahead.”she answered.

Roco then continued his journey. Roco looked up to the sky and saw grey clouds approaching so he ran   . After a few minutes running Roco found a nice fluffy coat.

Trees were blowing the the thunder storm started BANG BANG I ran until I saw something in the distance, it was grandmas house I ran and ran and ran.

I approached the front door I kocked. KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK grandma with a sor voice exlamed come in my dear I opened the front door and walked over hugged her tight and in the end we shared the cakes the medicens for her.

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