100 Word Challange

As individual flakes (from the sky) danced within  mid – air until gently landing onto  to the earth’s surface , each and every flake uniquely – patterned like delicate angel wings. Surprisingly , a young boy and a contented snowman were gradually ascending into the sky ,there beneath them were houses which were peeping out of their new , snow – covered caps . A gush of fresh , but cold breeze overtook the atmosphere and the moon’s vivid, luminous glow reflected upon the town . Glaring down , the boy clutched his teddy,  which comforted him , the white had nearly swallowed this exceptional place.

1 Comment

  1. bvaliza1 says:

    well done Menahil I love the way you have added adgectives to add more intense into the text , but could you try to addd atleast one alliteration.

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