MR FROSTY

On a cold,winter night snow was falling gracefully . The small,tired boy was waking up from a lovely,peaceful sleep. ” It snowed over the night mum !” he announced racing down stairs,” Can I build a snow man !”yes you can!” exclaimed mum from up the stairs . Racing out of the house,he started to build a huge ,large snow man. After tea time , he finally finished .  It This young boy was very tired, so of he went to tuck him self into bed .Suddenly, a creature climbed up.was his snow man .MR frost said,”Do you want to fly with me little boy!””Yes please!”   

2 Comments

  1. bvdawid says:

    This is good but can you make your punctuation better?

  2. bvgrace says:

    you could pick another word for cold

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