Dan and the flying snowman !

They The night before Christmas all was quiet and one young , handsome boy was awake … he was lying in his bed waiting for daylight to come . And then Dan heard a noise coming from outside it was a SNOWMAN, so dan crept downstairs out of the back door to be surprised by a snowman and a snow dog .  Pow a snowball came flying at full speed “hey that kinda hurt !” Said Dan  ,“ Do you want to come and fly with me and Stewart we are so bored are you coming ?” Asked the snowman . So they went of and flew into the distance “ weee were so high I love it yeah!” 

The end …

 

 

1 Comment

  1. bvhibah says:

    wow grace love your speech. next time add an 2a/4a sentence or fronted adverbial

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