5 sentence challenge

One stormy night, Hogarth and his dad where driving in the old,red car then suddenly… there was this huge thing blocking the road.He crashed in to the Iron Man’s foot. Hogarth’s dad’s car was destroyed and ruined his bonnet, roof and tyres came of also i made a huge dented in the car. So they had to walk home in the rain.

3 Comments

  1. mrdeboer says:

    Using capital letters and spaces most of the time.

  2. dawud1 says:

    THANKS SIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. bvsky says:

    Yes sir is right

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