The haunted castle

There is a castle with a prince inside. The peculiar walking trees are guards for him to protect the land from bloodcurdling monsters. This hidden dimension is on top of the clouds waiting to be seen by human eyes. The castle may look nice ,but it is secretly haunted. As you walk up the castle staircase you start to freeze with fear and you will be hoping to say do not kill me.

11 Comments

  1. bvawab says:

    great work abdulah.
    could you use some adverbs.

  2. bvjustin says:

    we done can yous more boys

  3. bvsameer says:

    nice work courd add a fronted adverbal olso can you add nwwh senteses.

  4. bvsameer says:

    amizing coured you add fronted adverbeal.

  5. bvrawen says:

    well done abdullah you have used new vocabulary next time use adverbs

  6. bvali says:

    great writing nice words like bloodcurdling can you use boys

  7. bvayma says:

    well done abdullah great story but could you use anew vocabulary.

  8. bvgabriel says:

    well done abdulah you have used lots of new vocabulary could you use similies

  9. bvtameem says:

    WELL DONE can you use noun w,w,w 😉

  10. bvtameem says:

    WELL DONE can you use noun w,w,w?

  11. bvabdullah1 says:

    wow Abdullah.

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