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In the colourful,bright woods there was a large,majestic castle in the distance. Nobody had ever been to save the princess in 40 years,but somebody had to save her from the fire breathing dragon. If they do, then they could get married and live happily ever after. theseus who had heared about the princess and went  after her. Then when he got there

1 Comment

  1. bvmujtaba says:

    Great use of adjectives!Make more use of fronted adverbials.

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