100 Word Challange

Beneath the deep-seated , water-full sea where the Mer people gather for tea. An eerie gloom spread across the sky like a blanket of fog. They discuss there tactics that would shrill your flesh into nothingness . A shiver that paralyzes your brain  . Their deathly whisper that grabs you from the ear into …. a new dimension . Heart pounding. Hands sweating . Mouth dry . There chatter seems to last FOREVER !!! NON-STOP ! Directly looking , your eyes and their eyes meet to reveal … a  blood-curdling grin ear to ear . Your under water in their world now – under their control . Will you live …. nobody knows , but you.

2 Comments

  1. bvabdullah1 says:

    menahil that was a very cool story next time you can use adverbs and alliteration

  2. bvaliza1 says:

    well done you have used lots of adgectives could you next time try to use a similie anyway well done

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