the day of the dragon/100 word challange

Oh no! The day the dragon came it was a terrible sight. Houses were burnt, people were dying. There was chaos everywhere. “HHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!” exclaimed a poor farmer  ” My crops are burning!”

the others ran. and ran. and ran. Meanwhile, all of the homes in that poor, unfortunate village got torched by the dragon. It roared in triumph and continued  burning houses. That very same village had suffered an unlucky mishap that day.all of the houses had been torched to the ground. eventually, the dragon went and the villagers went back to their newly built homes. the villagers had finally rebuilt.

2 Comments

  1. nicole1 says:

    ♡Good use of vocabulary
    ♡Good use of conjunction
    ■you could improve on your capital letters

  2. faith4dt says:

    Hi
    ☆ Direct speech
    ☆ Short sentences
    ⊙ You are missing capital letters in quite a few sentences

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