A dystopian world!

You would never imagine what happened….

Years had passed nothing had changed,The dystopian world was covered in ash just like mount Vesuvius in Rome; erupted and destroyed! No one knew what caused the fire ,except from one old scientist called Mc James Ollrone ,he had 2 great grand children,James had told the full story to them. The  true  story was that a mysterious dragon came and destroyed the tiny village of Mcnovell everyone was killed except James Ollrone and his only brother saint Jack Ollrone!The dragon was a disturbance for every one he continuously came and frightened  people to be continued…..

 

 

 

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2 Comments

  1. mothna says:

    Well Done! its made tense for the reader and i love the clift hanger!

  2. nicole1 says:

    ♡Good use of first person
    ♡Good use of punctuation
    ■Give more detail

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