Lucy fell a asleep in the house.
Edmund was siting on the witch chair. susan was play snow fight in the snow.
well done hamza! You used capital letter and full stops
WOW!!!! That is wonderful!! I hope you are proud of your writing !!I WAS SHOCKED AFTER I SAW THAT!! 😀
It was good but maybe you can add more ditars like who is the white whirch and way is Edmonde there and who is Edmonde .
I like your sentences,but make sure you have a capital letter for Susan’s name.
amazing writing but when you rote Edmund sat on the witch chair it didn’t make sense you need to put Edmund sat on the witches chair you need to put that because it belongs to someone.
Hamza! WOW! I have never seen anything like this before, it’s the best writing you have ever seen on your blog posts. Though to make them even more splendid, magnificent and marvelous, I’d suggest putting some adjectives in. For instance, Lucy fell asleep in the big, fancy house. Other than that, you have used capital letters and punctuation in the right places. I’ll look forward to your future posts.
I was going to say the same thing leah .
well done hamaza you did very well on your work i really liked it but you should check what you rote .
grate work hamza
you should make longer sentences and 2A,4A,BOYS. Anyways you made good sentences
Great sentence Hamza! make sure it makes scence here’s some corections:Edmund was sitting in the witch’s chair. Susan was playing in the snow having a snowBall fight. Keep up the good work!
well done hamza you need to look at your work so please correct but good try
Hamza that was great.Remember to use capital letters.
Well done Hamza good descriptive setences
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