The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, Witch and the Wardrobe

So far: Peter, Susan, Edmund , Lucy and their mother, were in a middle of a Blitz. Sadly their dad was in war and the children had to be  evacuated- Mother would be on her own. It was a long train journey, but soon arrived at their new home.

The house was HUGE house, which a old Professor lived in. Peter and Edmund went into the girls’ room to talk it over. Edmund, who is the second youngest, likes to wind up his youngest  sister Lucy. it was soon night time and they all went to bed.

The next morning, Lucy asked her older siblings if they could play Hide and Seek. ” Lucy we’re already having so much fun!” Peter exclaimed. Susan agreed with playing and so did Edmund. ” 1… 2… 3… 4… 5…” Peter counted.

Susan hid in a box, Edmund hid in a cupboard with a curtain door and Lucy,well she hid in a wardrobe. Fur coats brushed past her until a very hard coat brushed past her. Snow was under her feet… SHE WAS IN THE LAND OF NARNIA! So, she met a fawn, Mr Tumnus, and went to his very strange home and he was meant  to capture her!

He let her go and she landed back in the spare room she first found the Wardrobe.

Everyone thought she was telling a story. Edmund made her day a misery.

Later on Edmund followed her into the wardrobe one time and saw the White Witch! Now all the children are in Narnia because Edmund lead them their….

1 Comment

  1. sahifa 4d says:

    WOW! WELLDONE DAMIKE IT’S GREAT!
    You forgot a capital letter.
    The sentence was – it was soon night time and they all went to bed.

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