The bear and the hare

A flock of tweeting, quacking geese flew south.  They were on a mission to find a warmer, more comfortable atmosphere.  Nearby there was a gentle, maroon bear, called Bob. One late Autumn day, he walked along a mossy, forest path. He was not alone; beside him was his best friend he was smaller than Bob. A lot smaller. She has long ears that goes up when happy. Her name was Lulu.

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Quicker than a flash, the bear  stood up and Lulu slid down.

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The bear lifted his mouth in the air and yawned. His friend knew it was time. Hibernation. Soon his friend would in a deep sleep…

 

 

 

 

15 Comments

  1. Miss Durcan says:

    Wow Leah! This is fantastic writing. I especially like the description of the geese at the beginning. You have used a range of different sentence types, which have a great affect on the reader.

    I’d love to know what happens next…

  2. leah4 says:

    Amazing your writing was so imaginative!!I loved everything about it! from Leah and Osavbie 5H

  3. zara3 says:

    I loved the great description,but can you take another look at the last sentence. Except for that everything is perfect.

  4. yusuf says:

    Well Done! I like the structure of the text. I really want to know what happens next…

  5. Sarah Armistead says:

    Wow Leah – what a lovely read! Such an imagination and lots if description ! Your mummy told me how wonderful it was – so I had to look myself ! She is right ! Well done xx

  6. pam says:

    Fantastic story Leah keep the good work up

  7. Paul parkin says:

    Lovely story Leah great work you have done

  8. Jenny says:

    This is a fantastic piece of writing Leah!
    Very creative and descriptive!
    A pleasure to read 🙂

  9. Moira Hegarty says:

    Fab creative writing, Leah. Well done

  10. shaun says:

    Brilliant leah, excellant use of vocabulary.

    Very talented young writer, well done.

    I like this poem/story. Very nicely written.

  11. janette says:

    wow leah lovely work you should be proud of yourself.

  12. jason says:

    very nice short story Leah and well put together, looking forward to reading more excellent work like this.
    well done.

  13. Janet parkin says:

    That’s brilliant Leah look forward to you publishing your first book

  14. Michelle Yearsley says:

    Awww lulu’s ears goes up when he’s happy that’s so lovely. Sometimes we cannot see that someone is happy on the inside what a nice way to show it.

  15. Janiko says:

    You have definitely created the mood of Autumn in this story. The friendship between the rabbit and the bear sounds intriguing and fun. Your descriptions are warm and luscious. I definitely want to read more!

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