The Bare The Hare

Deep in the forest, huge kind bear and his friend the Hare trudged through the windy path. Suddenly the bear lifted his head and nocked the hare off his back .Without warning a snowflake landed on his nose.

” oh no time to hibernate”

 

2 Comments

  1. hana1 says:

    Well done bradley ! I like your sentence openers and great use of punctuation . Remember to write who is speaking after speeches .

  2. grace7 says:

    Very good writing and great adjectives Bradley

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