Morris

Morris is happy and good . Morris is reading  outside. The tornado  broke the house. The letrick was broke and it was dangerous. He fell of the door and bumped  his head .

 

 

 

3 Comments

  1. abdul4a says:

    Wow hamaza you jave done so well. Can you explain how was morris was feeling? Can you edit and inprove it? I know you can do it hamaza! The letrick is brokean wow that is amazing sentece i just want to read it 6879 times !

  2. Mrs "B" says:

    Hamza I do hope you are going to carry on with your story. I love it so far and I am intrigued to know what happens next to Morris and what damage the tornado may have done to other homes nearby.

    Keep up the good work.

  3. mothna says:

    wow hamza I love your writing

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