100 word challenge 19

IMG_2102.JPGThe rain dropped quietly, making the street look very blank.It had been 500 years since someone had been on that road but luckily in the year 2000 they had rebuilt the road to make it more modern.Thunder and storms raged around the road,the street light’s brightness completely blinded the street and most of the huge houses electricity was out so it was very dark in each house or everyone was fast asleep.The leaves of the bushes were rising and the leaves of the trees were falling creating tension as if something (a disaster) was going to happen.The street felt like a bomb.

5 Comments

  1. Nathan says:

    Great piece of work really amazing use of adjectives.

  2. Mrs H (team 100)Cheshire, UK says:

    A very descriptive piece, capturing the mood of the picture well. I like the leaves rising and falling and ‘creating tension’.
    Good work. Keep up the fine writing.

  3. Mr Curtis (team100) UK says:

    A great descriptive entry – well done. I really like your use of language to paint a picture in the reader’s mind. 🙂

  4. Mrs Heald says:

    Very descriptive writing! I could almost feel the atmosphere. I’m wondering what happens next in the story. Keep up the good writing. Well done!

    1. yunis6w says:

      Thank you for your comment and I will keep up the writing.

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