My poor cat (100 word challenge week 9)

Alone with Mittens, my heart was heavy. I knew the end was near. My cat’s eyes were glowing a luminous green, ripples shivered through her body. Then suddenly she fell to the ground dead. My mind was swimming like a whirlpool. My heart was broken and my eyes were full of tears, but when I though about our memories together my heart lifted. I was so upset until I saw my cat twitch and suddenly came back to life. It was a miracle and I hugged my cat tighter than ever. Mittens was alive again, I knew we would share many more memories together.

 

5 Comments

  1. missunderhill says:

    Wow!
    Your vocabulary choice is excellent Kian. The reader is able to feel the emotion that the person is feeling from their loss.

    1. kian6a says:

      thank you.

  2. molly6a says:

    Wow love it kian

  3. Mrs Jacques says:

    Enjoyed this one! Although I did think there was something evil/spooky going on when the eyes glowed luminous green!!

  4. sana6a says:

    This is fantatic!

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